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Wednesday 16 September 2015

BREAKFAST

I made this because in class we were trying to persuade kids to go and have breakfast.
Hi I’m Ronald and I think people should eat Breakfasts because It is important to our body's. Secondly because I think   it keeps our brain   working for the whole day. Thirdly because  it's keeps us full for the whole day,  eating breakfast give you energy And nutrition which you need to keep moving. Some people say that they don't have time to make there breakfast But you could make the day before and leave it in the fridge.Breakfast keeps you full for the whole day until dinner or you might have a little snack during the day.
So therefore we should eat
breakfast.    

1 comment:

  1. Good persuading Ronald! You have a good introduction and conclusion but how could you make them clearer?

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